2017-2018浙江高考讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)真題范文賞析

1、2016.9浙江高考：OneweekendinJulyJaneherhusbTomhaddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeinthefest.Unftunatelyonthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameuptheystartedtoquarrel.BythetimetheyreachedthelakeJanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom.“Imgo

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3、.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!“shecried.“Help!“Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmovingbutthefarthershewalkedthemeconfusedshebecame.AsnightwasbeginningtofallJanewassotiredthatshe

4、hadtostopfthenight.LyingawakeinthedarkJanewantedverymuchtobewithTomherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofdayhungrythirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落）somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshef

5、ollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoyshealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow.Janebegantowalkalongthestreamhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwa

6、ycarefullyalongthestreamJaneheardahelicopter.IsthatfmeUnftunatelythetreesmadeitimpossiblefpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslateranotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblousethinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenare

7、aflagthemiftheycamebackagain.注意:1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)：3.續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；4.續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Paragraph1Butnomehelicopterscameitwasgettingdarkagain.Paragraph2ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.201711

8、.浙江高考AvacationwithmymotherIhadaninterestingchildhood:Itwasfilledwithsurpriseamusementsallbecauseofmymotherlovingsweetyetabsentmindedfgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.Mytwosetsofgrparentsli

9、vedinColadoNthDakotamyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesseeingallthesightsalongtheway.AsthefirstdayofourtripapproachedDavidmyeightyearoldbrotherIunwillinglysaidgoodbyetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverse

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11、DavidIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:”YoustoutsidethedoplaylookoutwhileIgoI’llstoutsidethedoplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:“Honeywherearethekids”“Wha

12、t!OhGosh…Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecitybutweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.Onthefourthfifthnightwehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.AfterdrivinginvainfsometimeMomsuddenlygo

13、tagreatidea:Whydidn’twefindahousewithalikelylookingbackyardaskifwecouldsetuptentthereDavidIbecamenervous.ToourgreatreliefDadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstourobjections.IfastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdostepsMom

14、wouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneinthewldasasniceassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.注意：1.所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3.續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；4.續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Para1:Thenextdaywerememberedt