2018年上海高三英語一模作文范文匯編

1、116AA優(yōu)質(zhì)教研優(yōu)質(zhì)教研1882120893618821208936WeChatWeChatamos4321amos432120182018年高三一模作文匯編年高三一模作文匯編1.1.黃浦區(qū)黃浦區(qū)2017年已接近尾聲，還記得年初你為自己定下的小目標嗎？不知你是否實現(xiàn)了你的小目標？發(fā)一個微信朋友圈來回顧一下吧（文中請不要出現(xiàn)真實的校名人名）。你的朋友圈文字內(nèi)容需包括：1.你的2017年度小目標；2.你為實現(xiàn)年度小目標所作的努力；3.你實

2、現(xiàn)（或沒有實現(xiàn)）年度小目標的經(jīng)驗總結(jié)。范文：Mynewyear’sresolutionf2017wasthatIshouldbeabletocommunicatewithfeignpeopleinEnglish.ToachievethisgoalIhadaskedmyEnglishteacherfhelp.AccdingtohersuggestionsImadeupaplan.FirstlyIstartedwithsimplyreadi

3、ngEnglisharticlesfoundmanypronunciationerrsinmyreadingafterlisteningtothevideotapeofitsrecding.ThenItriedtolearnphoicspracticeonesyllableafteranotheragainagain.Istartedwithasinglewdthenaphraseasentenceaparagraphfinallyth

4、ewholepassage.After3monthpracticeIwasabletoreadanarticlefluentlywithoutmakinganymistakesinpronunciation.Ifelthappy.NextIpracticedmylistening.BylisteningtoapassagefourtimesIrequiredmyselftotakeitdownwithoutspellingerrsany

5、infmationblank.LastbutnotleastIinstalledanappcalledShanbeialEnglishonmyphonetopracticebothmylisteningspeaking.It’slikehavingconversationswitharobot.Ihadtounderstwhatitsaidtomeansweritsquestionsaccdingly.Afterpracticingfa

6、lmost8monthsIhadmyfirsttalkingsessionwithanAmericanteacherinourschool.Iwasproudofmyself.WhatIhavelearntfromthisexperienceissomethingasasayinggoes:nopainnogain.Thoughtheprocessoflearningcouldbedulltiringit’swthalltheeffts

7、afterIachievedmygoal.EvenifIdidn’tit’sstillavaluablepartofmylife.閱卷作文閱卷作文884=20Thewonderfulyearof2017isdrawingtoanend.IrememberthatIsetanannualgoaltokeepfitatthebeginningof2017sincestayinghealthyiscrucialtoensuringmystud

8、ythusbetterpreparemyselffGaokao.ToachievemygoalofkeepingfitherearesomeefftsI’vetakenthroughouttheyear.Ontheveryfirstdayof2017IdownloadedafitnessappcalledKeep.FollowingthefitnessinstructionstheappofferedIexercisedeveryoth

9、ernightbefeIgotobed.AlsoIdidsomeresearchintothedailynutritionIneedindertostayhealthybothphysicallymentallyafterwhichIdevisedamoderatedietingplan.ApartfromtheaboveI’veinvitedfamilymembersfriendstojoinmesothatwecanencourag

10、eeachotherexchangefitnessexperience.SofartherecdshownonmyfitnessappshowsthatI’vedonewellthisyearreachingarecdhighof200trainingtimesintotal.AlthoughattimesIfeltlikegivingupbecauseoftoomuchstudypressurelimitedtimeI’mgladIh

11、avestucktomyplan.ItseemstomethatanythingispossibleifIthrowinallofmyenergypassionmostofallperseverance.Somerulesapplytostudy.SoIhopeIwillkeepsuchpassionstrengthtodomybestinthecoming2018.（237wds）點評：1文本結(jié)構(gòu)段落清晰，符合作文題目要求。1）第一段

12、明確告知自己的年度小目標是什么；2）第二段有總起句，段落中有清晰的標記詞(如alsoapartfrom)告知讀者自己所做的努力，且努力的行為都非常具體。3）第三段對經(jīng)驗的總結(jié)可以再和第二段的三個努力匹配些，a.借助科技的力量(app)；b.借助科學的力量（didresearchintothedailynutrition）c.組團抗擊惰性。2在語言表達能力比較強的基礎(chǔ)上，可以考慮文字的進一步精煉。是否有“廢話”？字數(shù)建議不超過200（此學

13、生語言能力強，中等學生160左右即可）。精練而準確的表達也是思維和表達功力的體現(xiàn)。784=19Greetingfromtheendof2017!It’snowthetimetoconcludeouryearlygoalsagain.Onthenewyear’seveIsetuptwogoalsftheyear:togetterbettergradestoloseweightI’mproudtoannouncethatI’veaccomp

14、lishedthefirstone.Torealizethegoalsmucheffthasbeenputinthroughouttheyear.FirstofallIchangedmyattitudestowards316AA優(yōu)質(zhì)教研優(yōu)質(zhì)教研1882120893618821208936WeChatWeChatamos4321amos43211，涵蓋了作文題目要求的三個部分。2，第二段的內(nèi)容需要重新梳理，做了三個努力：a.每天早起做數(shù)學

15、題目；b.有問題勤問老師；c.心理焦慮時向媽媽傾訴（要說我做了什么，而不是文中Mymotheralwaysencouragemetostudymathwhenitcomestotheproblemofmath.）。3，由此，第三段的經(jīng)驗總結(jié)是：a.practicemakesperfect；b.多向他人求助441=9Theyearof2017willbeover.Ialwaysthinkitisayearwithmyambition.Is

16、tillremberthedaywhichisthefirstof2017.OnthatdayIpraiedIcouldgethigherscesinthetest.Imademyplantogetclosetothetopoftherank.FthesakeofgoodmarkswhatImusthaveisaseriousattitude.Itwasthemostimptantthingsfmetoinsisttheplan.Ide

17、cidedtoreadbooksofEnglish.Itwasthemostdifficultsubjectfme.Irecitedthewdsvocabularydaybyday.thereadingisananotherproblem.BecauseofthelackofvocabularyIcouldntunderstthepassageclearly.IstartedreadingtheEnglishlessonsinevery

18、mning.That’sgooddayfmethatIcouldneverfget.AlthoughIstillnotgetmyplanIstillwanttogethighersceinnextexam.ItwasmyambitionIbelieveIcandoitnextyear.Eventhoughthelifeistoughtome.(179wds)點評：1，結(jié)構(gòu)性缺失，沒有“經(jīng)驗總結(jié)”。2，第二段的內(nèi)容需要重新梳理。a.每天背

19、多少單詞；b.每天早晨讀多少時間英語；c.每周（或每兩周或每個月）讀1本英語書。2.2.普陀區(qū)普陀區(qū)學校圖書館優(yōu)美的學習環(huán)境和豐富的文獻資源為學生們綜合素質(zhì)的提升提供了良好的平臺。為了進一步提高圖書館的服務水平，圖書館現(xiàn)向?qū)W生們征集建議。假如你是李華，寫信給圖書館負責人對圖書館的現(xiàn)狀進行分析，并就此提出一些實用性的改進建議。DearSirInresponsetoyourcollectingsuggestionstofurtherimpr

20、oveourschoollibrary’sservicequalityIamwritingtoputfwardmyhumbleadvicehopingtobeofsomevalue.Ourschoollibrarywithbeautifulenvironmentawiderangeofbooksreferencematerialsservesasagoldenplatfmtopromotestudents’overallability.

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24、istingwk.Iwouldbesogladifmyadviceisadopted.Iappreciateyourdevotiontotheconstructionofourlibrarymayourlibrarybebetterbetter.SincerelyyoursLiHua3.3.徐匯區(qū)徐匯區(qū)俗話說“萬事開頭難”（Allthingsaredifficultbefetheyareeasy.）。你是否同意這一說法？請用英語寫一篇短