滿(mǎn)分雅思大作文賞析

1、 滿(mǎn)分雅思大作文賞析 滿(mǎn)分雅思大作文賞析范文第一段：Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you a

2、gree or disagree Some feel that the children of low income families are better equipped to deal with difficulties posed by the real world when they grow up and they also believe the privileged children of wealthy familie

3、s are less fit to deal with these difficulties . The implications and veracity of this argument seem self-evident, but in fact require closer examination. ( 58words )名師點(diǎn)評(píng)：最后 1 句為主題句。此段的主題句稍微有點(diǎn)特殊，它的確否定了前面所提到的觀點(diǎn)，從而表達(dá)出了自己的觀

4、點(diǎn)，此外還引出了下文。特別是最后半句：but in fact require closer examination ，感覺(jué)是在拋磚引玉。范文第二段：know this, and those of the wealthy do not . Who though, is in a better position to teach their children the value of money; someone skilled in ea

5、rning and keeping it, the wealthy parent, or someone who can not seem to acquire it, the poor parent Both wealthy and poor children are equally likely to acquire an education in money, whether it is formal, or in the sch

6、ool of hard knocks. Conversely, both children are as likely to ignore this education. (101words)名師點(diǎn)評(píng)：這段的內(nèi)容感覺(jué)寫(xiě)得不夠直接，還是在分析對(duì)方觀點(diǎn)的漏洞!請(qǐng)注意，前面讓步段已經(jīng)這么寫(xiě)過(guò)了，那么這一段最好是正面地論證自己的觀點(diǎn)，這樣從內(nèi)容上來(lái)說(shuō)更 convincing 一點(diǎn)!此外，需要說(shuō)明的是，大家發(fā)現(xiàn)作者的內(nèi)容還是有一定深度，但是這是要